First time model "shoot"

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  1. AquaVelvet

    AquaVelvet TPF Noob!

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    Hey


    I'm new to the board, I thought I would put out some of my work. I'm no where near the pro like some on here but I hope to get there one day.

    these pictures where taken in a makeshift studio. with 2 soft-boxes. It was a school project, Pictures on music. This shoot was called 'Overdose' she is supposed to look ruff ;) I just now got CS3 and a Imac (this month) but these pictures are still worked at with Adobe 6.0 :er:

    I would love to hear what you have to say about them. and any tips are welcome!


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    Thanks! :thumbup:
     
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    The quality is ok, but to me she looks more "beaten down" the "rough". It's tough to explain... i miss a spark in her eyes, maybe. But stil,l you got it down pretty good.
     
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    thanx :)


    this was the 2nd time she was a model, I think she did a great job for so little experience :mrgreen:

    indeed the sparks. I think its the light faling into her eyes just wrong and the hair there. I would need to up it with CS3 but I just got it a week ago so i'm still trying to figure it out :lol:

    rather different from the 6.0 I had before :lmao:

    thanks for your time and comment :D
     
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    Yeah I think for these images the eyes would be considered the subject and they're obstructed in one image and not shown in the other. The processing looks good though, I like the contrast and that she looks like she's coming off a weekend long bender though. ;)
     

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