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  1. Arent_Photography

    Arent_Photography TPF Noob!

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    Hey all,

    Just wanted to say wassup and being that this is my first post, I wanted to get some feedback on this image I took a while back...watcha think?

    Thanx,

    "T"

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  2. photogoddess

    photogoddess TPF Noob!

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    I really like it but am really bothered by the fisherman on the right being cut off. I might try to crop him out and see how it looks.
     
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    welcome to the forum. I agree with photogodess regarding the cropping of the right. Also, the horizon is slanted pretty heavily to the right.

    Fix those things and I think you have a great shot.
     
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    Thanx...I'll definitely work on that. Reason for the slanted background was trying to hang out of a car window while moving...haha.
     
  5. Chase

    Chase I am now benign! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    That is probably the best reason I have ever heard for a slanted horizon!! :lol:

    I agree with the others. I think you have a good shot there, and if you can make those two changes, I think it will be a great shot! Looking forward to more.
     
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    Just my opinion, not much you could do about it I fear tho. The guy on the right seems to blend into the horizon and water horribly as well. Great shot for a "Out the Window"
     
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    Considering that you were on the move and taken from the car, it has come quite well. May be little more work on PS for horizon part correction and cropping the guy on right would, make it better. You may consider reposting it after your PS work

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