First Wedding...

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by aammoore, Jan 7, 2008.

  1. aammoore

    aammoore TPF Noob!

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    Go easy...I'm learning. Just wanted a few critiques on a few :)

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    I think they're beautiful.

    I would be careful on the processing. They are borderline over-processed and soft (not out of focus, just soft). I do love the look of the flowers (probably my favorite.

    Great job. Keep it up!
     
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    you did fine, but keep your backgrounds in mind.

    Take the first one for example, it's unclear when the candle starts or finishes because the bokeh is more interesting.
     
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    These are very good IMO. You did very well with use of fill flash in relation to ambient/available light. It would be nice to see them a little bigger though.

    Good job!

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    hey good job!!! good lighting, nice saturation colours and sharp images....i agree that you are going a bit overboard on the softness thing, but that is a matter of taste too...at least it was used on romantic poses!

    watch your 'horizon'...or in this case background and keep things straight...

    otherwise, good job!!! you are off to a great start!
     
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    Very wise critique...I was so in love with the background that I didn't even think about it taking away..lol Thanks!
     
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    aammoore TPF Noob!

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    Yeah during processing...I began to think..."I'm doing this too much" lol These are only a few that I have processed....

    The thing is..most of them need a bit of processing and I just LOVE this soft look...lol I know I did over do it..because all of my favorites are soft..on here...but I have only done a few others that way. :)

    Thanks for all the compliments and critiques it really helps!
     
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    Nice! First one looks a bit warm and underexposed.

    With the one with flowers, try having the flower in the middle in color only.
     
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    it is hard to get a good look as the images are so small. They do feel very soft.
     

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