Flooded boat

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by kittymaguire, Sep 30, 2007.

  1. kittymaguire

    kittymaguire TPF Noob!

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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, there is some play with reflections going on here.
    As a photo it is not abstract enough to be called "an abstract", but yet not providing the amount of context the viewers would need to know what they are looking at without your title. I don't know whether that is good or bad.
    What I see (and can't avoid looking at) is the bright white thing on the left - I find that extremely distracting.
    This being a scene of desertion and maybe also even a bit of decay, I would wish for a more contrasty, and maybe even "grittier" photo... though well, I would not really know how to achieve that look myself, either. Strong contrasts? A bit of noise added even? Something like that?
     
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    Thanks for the comment, I will try increasing the contrast
     

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