Flower shot

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  1. willg133

    willg133 TPF Noob!

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    I haven't taken too many flower shots, but tell me what i can do to improve


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  2. thebeginning

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    ooh i like :)


    it seems a taaaaaaad out of focus though to me. but i could be wrong...we'll see.
     
  3. willg133

    willg133 TPF Noob!

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    do you think it might just be the sharpness of the lens? i have a canon 50mm 1.8 coming soon so maybe that will help with flower pics
     
  4. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like it - I like the composition.
    But I think this photo could do with a bump in saturation.
     
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    Yeap, but keep the "almost B&W" background untouched, it gives a nice contrast.
     
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    I agree with the saturation. The background I like a lot but I think the flower could do with a bit more yellow. How does it look from a slightly more head on view?
     

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