Flower Shots (2)

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Trenton Romulox, Jan 18, 2008.

  1. Trenton Romulox

    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

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    Critique is not only appreciated, it's straight up encouraged. Lay it on me, hardcore. I want some harsh, honest, down to earth, straight-talkin' critique folks, you won't hurt my feelings, promise.

    Sepia Flowers:
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    Magenta Flowers:
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    Taken with Nikon 14-24mm on Nikon D300 using Nikon SB-800 off-camera as remote flash.
     
  2. oldnavy170

    oldnavy170 TPF Noob!

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    I like the two tone effect in your first photo. The second one is not as interesting (to me) but I do like the first shot.
     
  3. Amnesic

    Amnesic TPF Noob!

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    I don't like the glow around the flowers in the first one. But I like the idea. The second one might either have to much contrast or is too dark or something. They are both pretty good though.
     
  4. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It’s not my style so I will pass on any hardcore critiques.

    For #1: The foreground is large and empty, the angle of stem or it run off the drop seem odd to me, and I can see a dark line where the drop end in the upper left; hope that helps
     
  5. The Empress

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    I love the first one!!!! Both are good though!!
     

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