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  1. cypilk

    cypilk TPF Noob!

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  2. MDowdey

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    hey man!!!

    i like the shot but here is my .02


    1) theres really no area i can focus on that stands out. the main flower in the top is out of focus and a little distracting.

    2) i want a little more contrast with this pic.

    other than that, the idea is there!!! great work!!

    matt
     
  3. bogleric

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    Fantastic crop. Excellent idea. But...
    There's no isolated main subject
    There's no contrast

    With post processing it's possible to sharpen a selected flower and increase the overall contrast

    This reminds me of the addage: "a good photographer can create Art even with a throw-away 110 camera.

    I wish I had been the one who shot this pic.
     

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