Flowers C&C part 2

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  1. EleanorW

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    Ok, here are a few more... not as good I don't think as my first ones, but am interested in hearing what I did wrong. For the most part I'm looking at them and knowing somethings wrong, but have no clue what it is for the most part :)

    #1 f9.0, 1/320, iso100 and aperture

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    #2 f8.0, 1/500, iso100 and aperture

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    #3 f5.6, 1/200, iso and aperture

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    #4 f5.6, 1/1600, iso100 and aperture

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    1 + 2 seem to be too busy imo...
    3 is nice I would like some more DOF so that all of the flower is shart
    4 is nice composition but the flower is cut off on both sides

    just my $0.02
     
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    #3 is really cool, wish it was a bit bigger though
     
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    Melissa - the image, or the flower in proportion to the image?
     
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    the flower :)
     
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    Is this better Melissa?

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    I like it! I was actually thinking more about keeping it a vertical crop but just a closer vertical one, this is cool too though!
     

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