Flowers--Up north

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  1. heatlightening

    heatlightening TPF Noob!

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    I just thought they were pretty. This was in Summer 2006.

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    The color is pure, I like it!
     
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    #1 is quite lovely but it has a couple of things that hurt it.
    First, there's a lot of excess space that only detracts from the impact of the flower. I would crop this to 4 x 5.
    Second, the background is very similar in tone to the main subject. I would mask out the foreground flowers and darken the background to isolate them some.
    Third, I would try and increase the brightness of the flowers without losing the detail in the smaller one just below the center.
     

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