Flowers

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  1. Dhrubajyoti

    Dhrubajyoti TPF Noob!

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    These pictures were taken at Raccoon Creek State Park, PA. Comments and critics are most welcome. I am a newbie, and I am here to learn. Please guide me how to improve.

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    I like the second the most. The crop (1) is too tight, I like the wide effect caused by the branches.
     
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    Thanks for your comments mdw.
     
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    I would agree that the 2nd is the best, but it still needs a crop. Maybe cut off the last 2 flowers on the right side.
     
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    Soul, feel free to post a cropped version as you said.
     
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    I like it more without the crop because I prefer the long, dark, spindly branches to the better composition of the cropped shot. (even though the branches are out of focus) I think it works better with the dark, mysteriousness.
     
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    Totally agree on that! The new crop makes another version of #1.
     

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