Folk Tale

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  1. doli

    doli TPF Noob!

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    I was trying... something comical. I burned the background and the bowl because it was washed out... but I wanted it to look a little cartoony.
    Does anyone get that it's supposed to be Goldielocks!
    I took this with a Fuji finepix Digital with flash, my film (no flash) is still being processed of the same shoot.
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    Thanks again!
     
  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, since you told us right away, we have little chance to find out for ourselves if we would have thought of Goldilocks upon looking at this photo.
    As a German, I might not have, since the story is not foremost in our German minds, we know other stories better, so I might not have assumed she was to present Goldilocks. And, hmph, you give others little chance to guess.
    Her locks are very golden, that much is true!
    I like the contrasts in this, though I don't like to see the filled spoon as close to her mouth as it is. But that is a personal thing.
    I'm now curious to see the no-flash-photo-on-film pic!
     
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    i kind of like it, dont think i would have got the goldielocks thing...

    The burning in on the wall is a bit brutal, cut the hand off holding the spoon too...

    the colours are weird in a good way i think

    like the photo, but im not entirely sure why
     
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    Well, firstly, I don't like the cropping job, by that i mean the spoon seemingly coming out of nowhere, I think this would have been cooler had you gotten her whole body, maybe give her a cute goldilocks dress. It looks a little too much like a candid picture of a girl eating breafast. Overall I just don't think it expresses what you were trying to get across.
    On the other hand, I like what you did with the hue and contrast. Keep that in mind if you try the shot again.
     
  5. doli

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    If I get anything worth keeping from the film shoot... I'll post this week...
    thanks for all the feedback.
     

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