Food Silo

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Mo, Nov 24, 2004.

  1. Mo

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    Not a very interesting picture. Composition's pretty boring.
     
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    Perfect for a food silo brochure :)

    Yey for positivity :D
     
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    I guess that it isn't really that good. When I first built my photo gallery I liked it though. Ive got some better pics in there.
     
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    ditto on silo, I do like the parrot pic (did you mean for it to link there?) It seems, though, that the focus is on the wing and not the head. Eyes are the attention grabbers of animals. Also the bird seems slightly underexposed but the grass is already overexposed. No tips, just opinions.
     
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    Well, some of the grass is overexposed, but some is just right. I might improve it a bit, but that's definitely my favorite picture.

    If anyone was wondering about that picture, just see it here:

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    A lot of people love this photo, based on a different forum that I post in. Also, it is the most viewed image in my Coppermine Gallery.

    I just made the wing a bit brighter and the bright grass a bit darker BTW.
     
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    totally read my mind!

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