For a friend

Discussion in 'The Creative Corner' started by manda, Jul 10, 2004.

  1. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    Nobody ever reads these but what the hell...


    See the sunrise over your smile
    So shallow and stale the night becomes
    the sun wrapped up in a black box
    shadowed from your day
    let it out
    to burst your soul again

    Like the summer song
    that whistles under your mind at night
    wrap your heart in its warm
    let a new sunrise tread lightly
    on your days gone, to find a place
    inside your big, brave world.

    gravity wont let you fall
    the arms and hands bound around you
    will let you lean gently into the light

    if i could find you wings to fly upon
    i would
    if i could give you a note to sing upon
    i would

    step into the sun that will carry you
    to the place you want to be....
     
  2. photogoddess

    photogoddess TPF Noob!

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    Oh - we read em alright. ;) This forum just leave some of us speachless sometimes.

    Very nice!
     
  3. Luminosity

    Luminosity No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thats beautiful Manda.
    Theres a sadness curling around your words yet at the same time it has that ' free' feelin about it...as if one was letting their beloved bird out of its cage , to let it soar out into the world..
     
  4. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    thanks girls
     
  5. markc

    markc TPF Noob!

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    Wow, manda.

    That's both moving and inspiring. Well done.
     
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    japmula TPF Noob!

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    I love that! Shows me what a beautiful mind you possess...=)
     
  7. Karalee

    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    I...I read them....but sometimes like this one theres just nothing left to be said...
     
  8. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    [insert witty comment here]

    That is a wonderful poem.
     
  9. airgunr

    airgunr TPF Noob!

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    I read them, just at a loss for words at times.

    I like it.
     

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