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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by shutter1000, Aug 18, 2008.

  1. shutter1000

    shutter1000 TPF Noob!

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    Beautiful weekend so I went for a drive and stumbled upon this photo op

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    I feel too much of the building is cut off; the shingles on the upper right makes me wonder what else is there and really causes my eye to wander from the entrance way which is most likely your intended focus point.
     
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    Yeah, I would have liked to see the whole building. Awesome tones, though!

    PS Also nice comp and great sharpness, too! But you already know that, right?:)
     
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    Thanks for the input. Too many "modern" residential structures in the background for a full building shot. Getting rid of them made the building feel more "forgotten"
     
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    johngpt No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nice find. Will you be posting more that you've taken of this building?
     

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