Four new pics for feedback

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  1. gsm275

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    This batch is all my wife's. Looking to get some feedback for her.

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    Haha very interesting good job :) :thumbup:
     
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    ah, number one is the best. :) golden warm and kind of abstract :)
     
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    I really like number one. It's got a lovely tranquil feeling about it. Shame about the out of focus sticks in the foreground, but it's still a fantastic shot.

    As for number 4, I would've tried to punch the background out of focus by selecting a large aperture (small F-number). Although again, it's a really small niggle, and it's a fantastic photo as it is, really interesting.
     
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    Nice work by your wife. All look good. Only thing I would suggest would be to fill the frame a bit more with the sculpture in #2, using the blue sky marginally as a contrast on the very edges. But again...nice job.
     
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    i like them ..
     
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    Thanks all for the feedback! I hate to admit it, but i think she might be better then me.

    (don't tell her i said so)
     
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    This must be a couple weeks back since the roof on BC Place is deflated. Props on the shots
     
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    What I look the most on these is that they are all really original, I've never seen anything like them, maybe #1 but the rest are really outofthebox.

    #1: Really beautiful tones, I like the silhouettes and I especially like that there is still detail in them!

    #2: Another good one, minor nitpicks would be to clone out the sand(?) and such from the sky, but that's just my opinion.

    #3: This one made me say 'oh shxt! a fish!' Haha, really interesting subject and nice red hues all around.

    #4: I love how there's little buildings on the globe! I like the lighting from the left of the globe, to the right it gets a bit darker but it's still an awesome photo!

    Overall: I love them all, she's got a great eye and wonderful photos!
    P.S.: Where were these taken?!
     
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    Thanks! These well all taken in Vancouver, BC around the False Creek area.
     
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    This is at False Creek in Vancouver Canada beside the Olympic Village, GM Place where the Canucks play.
     
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    Oh! Thats it! Im Tellin her :p haha Jk

    I really like them. Overall, I think she did a good Job. There are a few distractions in the first shot ( weeds? ) but they dont take away from the shot..
    Theyre very different. She has a good eye for these things. :thumbup:
     

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