Freedom

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Danny_Dulieu, Jul 2, 2010.

  1. Danny_Dulieu

    Danny_Dulieu TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2010
    Messages:
    6
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Belgium
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    here it is :

    [​IMG]

    Very hard burning under the enlarger to obtain this locked image.
     
  2. Steve Reddin

    Steve Reddin TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 29, 2010
    Messages:
    106
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Ireland
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Hi,

    The concept is good, but I don't think it's being pulled off to it's best ability in this image.

    Her left hand is too bright (I'd loose the bracelets as well) and doesn't have the detail that is present in her right hand. There is also something that looks plastic appearing above her left thumb, I'm not sure what it is but I don't think it should be there.

    The framing has created some large areas of black top and right that I feel make the image unbalanced.

    The light might work, but not in it's current form, I'd expect to see a wall lamp in this position, such as you might see in an asylum; the lamp as it currently is just isn't working although I'm guessing this is appearing more because of the method you used.

    Overall I love the black noir grainy feeling of the image but I'd like to see a bit more attention given to the image on another try.

    Steve
     
  3. white

    white TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 7, 2010
    Messages:
    1,131
    Likes Received:
    7
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think this is a wonderful image. I don't agree with most of the criticisms made, except that I'd also like to see more detail in the left hand if possible. But as-is, it does not bother me.

    I wish it was straightened, though.
    Everything is harder in the darkroom.
     

Share This Page

Search tags for this page

danny dulieu

,

freedom