Friend In The Park

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Graelwyn, Jun 17, 2008.

  1. Graelwyn

    Graelwyn TPF Noob!

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    Feel free to edit if you feel you can improve the levels on these... I am ultra tired so struggled to see straight enough to do a decent job, plus am new to the pp stuff.

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  2. Blackwell

    Blackwell TPF Noob!

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    pic #1- First time smoker?
     
  3. Graelwyn

    Graelwyn TPF Noob!

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    Nope, I just caught him at an unflattering moment... he smokes all the time.
     
  4. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Hrmmm... #1 doesn't do too much for me; the combination of the pose and strong highlights I think.
    2. Much nicer, but the expression isn't quite right.
    3. I really like this one, my only suggestion would be to lighten dark area behind his head just a little bit.
    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
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  5. Graelwyn

    Graelwyn TPF Noob!

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    Thanks... more grabbed shots than anything posed. I took what I could while he would sit there, lol.
     

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