Friend Portrait

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by thekyle, Aug 17, 2009.

  1. thekyle

    thekyle TPF Noob!

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    i took a while ago but i will share it anyway.

    i liked the light from my gross grimy dorm window, so i took out the camera.

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  2. choudhrysaab

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    over all very well composed.
    i wud've encluded the legs in the picture ... right now her hips look a bit odd in the picture.
    i like the lighting =)
     
  3. gopal

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    i agree with choudhrysaab about the highly odd black hip portion of the model...the face's value is retained thanks to her upper body.
    in photography front view or something near to camera counts more and the prominence is reduced as the subject recedes or converted into a good bokeh.....though good light, sharpness and focus are well maintained. tfs.
     
  4. five pennies

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    I love the lighing but I think you could have found a more flattering angle to take it from
     
  5. Yemme

    Yemme No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    If she was nude I think that would have made the shot. If the color scheme of what she was wearing was different than the darker lower portion of her body, the jeans. The image would not pull your eyes to that. I like it either way.
     

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