friend - Tomaz

anel · Mar 5, 2009

we had a conversation and he kept swingin' those drum sticks so i had a go, what do u think?

anel · Mar 6, 2009

bump^^

adamwilliamking · Mar 6, 2009

The first one is well composed but the 2nd doesnt do much for me

Both could probably use a bump up in exposure

Early · Mar 6, 2009

adamwilliamking said:
The first one is well composed but the 2nd doesnt do much for me

Both could probably use a bump up in exposure

The 2nd one could have been sharper, and the acne touched up, but the way his friend is framed between the drumsticks help it somewhat, no?

Cero21 · Mar 6, 2009

I find the drumsticks are very distracting. I can't stop focusing on them. Esp in the second.

Maybe they would be good props in a full body or half body pic?

anel · Mar 7, 2009

i see what you mean, i see how they are distracting in the 2nd shot... but i do thing they fit in the first one, agreed on the exposure. will keep trying with natural light, thx all =)

adamwilliamking · Mar 8, 2009

Early said:
The 2nd one could have been sharper, and the acne touched up, but the way his friend is framed between the drumsticks help it somewhat, no?

The way he is framed between the drumsticks is what ruins the photo.
And, touching up the acne? Thats far too subjective to comment on.

EDIT: Forget to mention that the drumsticks work very well in the first one. The positioning plays tricks on his face in the 2nd.