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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by cookiemaster99, Nov 18, 2007.

  1. cookiemaster99

    cookiemaster99 TPF Noob!

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    This is my friend Rebecca at the park...for some reason she decided to climb into this...but it made for a cute picture.

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    Fly, my friends, fly.

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    This is in France, I've forgotten what the name of this shoreline city is, but the sea and landscape was quite beautiful. After taking this shot of Brendan, I thought it looked like it had sort of a deeper meaning to it.



    What do you guys think?
     
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    Any comments?
     
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    Tell Becca to get a toothbrush.
    The people in the background on 3 are distracting as well.
     
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    cookiemaster99 TPF Noob!

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    Dude, that's not nice. I appreciate constructive criticism but don't ever insult my friends. You have no right too.
     
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    I fail to understand the point of this comment other than to be rude. Is there a reason for this?
     
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    I know not everyone knows how to give criticism in a polite manner so you just have to try and ignore those comments (trust me though, I know its not easy)

    However, I like the first shot. Its a tad dark but thats an easy fix.

    Please keep your photos coming. Thats how we all learn is when you receive useful criticism.
     
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    Thank you, I'll remember to ignore those unnecessary comments. And yes, I'll defintely keep my photos coming.
     
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    Cookiemaster, whitening teeth is a relatively easy process to do in photoshop, so make sure you give it a try. Google some tutorials.
     
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    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Is the angle on #2 intentional? I think #3 needs straighten about 1-3 deg to the right. Nice composition on the three
     
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    I was going to comment on Rebecca's beautiful smile!!
     
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    Yes agreed, stupid comment, the female in the photo has a lovely smile. The first shot is the only one I see anything in. I'd go back to a shot like that and try some more poses, maybe hanging onto the bars, as if escaping, or caught up, rather than just a cute pose.

    I think the second shot is overexposed, the middle guy is out of focus. The background is too focussed, I'd like to see the shot with great detail in the three people. Maybe experiment with different expressions, poses, as I'm sure you could do better. I do like the angled approach, Id rather that than a straight shot.

    As for Three, I don't find anything of interest in the photo, there is no detail in colour in the shot. I can't see a reason to why I could be interested in the shot.
     
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    my god you people are beyond uptight...

    and if you really want critique the yellow teeth are very distracting, its the first thing your eyes go for...she does have a nice smile but it is utterly ruined. Call it whatever you like but its the truth...
     

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