Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by A.Rotshtein, May 15, 2004.
Interesting shot! Well composed. I am not sure about seeing the back of the subjects head. The photo works better for me if I think in terms of shapes as opposed to people.
Look at this earlier in the day. Think I agree with Craig on this. I like to see faces.
Keep The Good Work:thumbsup:
This is good ... experimentation , looking at things at angles different to what we're used to.Its intruiged me to the point where I'm curious about their faces , their expressions/emotions at that particular point.Would love to see a side on view.
A view of their faces , all looking in the same direction , would better relay their relationship and the theme of friendship to me. JMO.....
Sorry that I cant offer any objective critisism on the technical side , being so new to photography I would be out of my depth.Can only offer you my thoughts based on a purely visual laymen aspect. Someone who has just walked in off the street, so to speak .
You don't need the faces in there. Five wetsuits and a surfboard tells the whole story. All of them sitting together, looking off in the same general direction; it's a story picture, the best kind IMHO........................
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