From a recent shoot

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    Ignore the text. It's just the name of the shades she was wearing. This is from a model shoot at school. From the little bunch me and my class partner shot, these two (which I shot) are the ones I wanted to share.

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    they look great danalec

    Makes a refreshing change to see some fashion portrait in the forum.

    Most fashion shots are heavily airbrushed, these still have a nice natural feel to them.
     
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    Love these Dan!
    The second one rocks :thumbsup:

    There is a light spot in her hair that looks like a bald spot that you might wanna touch up?
     
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    Nicely composed ! Sweet lighting too. Very nice photograph.
     
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    Thanks guys!

    I did notice that too. Since this is not a pro shoot, I thought I'd be a bit laid back.;) Thanks!
     
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    :thumbsup: Cool!
     
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    I love the crops and empty spacing. The second is my favorite. Rock on Dan!
     
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    I can't! That's the part that's bothering me. It's my commercial background, I suppose. The point is, with the text, it makes the image a photograph of the glasses, and the product just don't stand out enough.

    Now you've had a look into my twisted mind.

    Pete
     
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    BTW... happy birthday!
     
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    It's your B-day Dan? HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    I also like the space and the cropping....Nice Dan! : )
     
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    But would you know that it was the name of the glasses if I had not mentioned it? It was not my intention, in these two frames, to highlight the glasses. If it were the case, I'd have atleast tried to emulate it's font. We are supposed to submit an image with some text on it. And I couldn't think of any better title. :)

    Please feel free to be twisted all you want :). It's the honest input/exchange that most of us seek. :thumbsup:

    Thanks Pete, Cindy for the wishes and everyone for the input!
     

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