from my friend's lawn

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by kaymlo, Oct 6, 2008.

  1. kaymlo

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    [​IMG]

    I'm not crazy about the bright sky in the upper left corner, but I couldn't find a good way to crop it since I prefer the width of the shot as it is.

    Comments/critique if you please.
     
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    i really like the crispness of this macro. if you want me to edit out the bright sky in the corner I can but your photos 'are not ok to edit' so i wont untill you give me the thumbs up.

    other than that, ascetically pleasing, nice shot!
     
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    I don't mind the bright sky, it even (just barely) makes the photo more dynamic via the implied direction of the light. If it were me, I might even include more of the sky.

    Bear in mind I am a total noob. :)

    Still, great shot!
     
  4. kaymlo

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    Thanks AF and Scruff for the comments.

    AF44 I'd be happy to see what you can do with the shot - thanks!
     
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    here is my rendition with a nice mona lisa altered horizon

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    AF44 that is perfect! Exactly what I was looking for. Wish I could pull that off :) Thank you.
     
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    just get photoshop and take a little time to learn it haha... that actually is a pretty crappy job as far as photoshop goes, but thanks for the compliment
     
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    I love the shot, although it would be nice to see the entire flower/weed..
     
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    Thanks Jay, yeah I wish I'd taken a few more shots, I didn't even know what this one looked like until I got it on my computer.
     

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