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  1. competition

    competition TPF Noob!

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  2. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    I like the second one... although the focus is strange or maybe it's just me and my eyes :)
     
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    The second one has some strange effect espacially in the face of the lady and on the feather.

    It seems like the shot was too slow.

    I like the composition in the second picture more than in the first one, however, there's something weird about the picture that I cannot precise. Probably because you cut out the hair, or the angle of the picture... not sure what it is.

    Besides that, I personally think this one's very good.
     
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    First one is best for me yet the expression on her face needs to be muted a bit more (less expression). Almost to where you are not sure if she is happy or some other emotion.
     

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