Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by competition, Dec 22, 2004.
I like the second one... although the focus is strange or maybe it's just me and my eyes
The second one has some strange effect espacially in the face of the lady and on the feather.
It seems like the shot was too slow.
I like the composition in the second picture more than in the first one, however, there's something weird about the picture that I cannot precise. Probably because you cut out the hair, or the angle of the picture... not sure what it is.
Besides that, I personally think this one's very good.
First one is best for me yet the expression on her face needs to be muted a bit more (less expression). Almost to where you are not sure if she is happy or some other emotion.
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