Fully Abstract

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  1. craig

    craig TPF Noob!

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    Obsessed by the library sculpture. I am really groov'n on this one; please let me know any and all thoughts.


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    not seeing an image...
     
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    It's an abstract to us who don't know what it looks like in the first place...
    I love how the light shines through though! :D
     
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    After staring for a while (I think abstracts kind of require that.. ); the top of the circle is cut off, I don't know if it would help or not since I can't compare but it might help. The only other thing I can think of is there is the potential for some nice colors in here. I'd like to see a boost in saturation.

    Besides that I think you've got a keeper here. I like it!
     
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    Thanks for the replies! I will try a saturation boost.
     

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