Fun pic

[eccs19]

Well this may not be much of a challange, but I've got these 2 pictures. 1 is the original picture NO PP from the RAW, just resized for the forum. Second one is what I did for cropping, etc. I really like the way the water looks in this, but I'm sure you can see his right shoulder has blue reflecting on it. Anyone want to see if they can make this good shot great? I can send someone the RAW if they want to play with it. Only problem is that it's almost 13 meg. I'm not sure if I can host a raw file on photobucket or not. Anyways, here's the pics. First one is original, and second if my attempt. Please also feel free to C&C my work. I know the original I forgot about the rule of thirds. I have trouble with that. :x

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