Fun with a tractor

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  1. WDodd

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    I live on a farm and my girlfriend is from the nearby town so she wanted to do a fun tractor shoot. I wanted you guys and gals to tell me what I did wrong. :lol:

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  2. Alpha

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    You need a shallower DOF, and I would shoot when there's more light. Other than that, you're on the right track.
     
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    Just wanted to say:
    1) You have a hot gf (saw the bikini pics recently too)
    2) I like your car

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    Okay. This is the critique forum. Why don't you keep your coveting to yourself or via PM and add something constructive in your posts or keep your personal stuff in check.
     
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    its a different person not the same girl... no tattoo... come on now, be observant, your a photographer...
     
  6. WDodd

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    Same girl, tattoo is there its just hidden. :wink: Fooled ya.


    Thanks for the tips Max I will take them into account next time I shoot. As far as the light though, I thought the shade would be better than the direct sunlight. I used the large trees to block the sun so its "open shade."
     
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    Damn. Think you could teach me how to move large trees? :)
     
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    The only thing I see off is her leg is in a funny position in #2. Other then that I think these look good.
     
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    I think it would be even more sexy with bare feet.
     
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    Something seems lost in the eyes to me. I know absolutly nothing about photographing models though but it seems to me that they should be brighter.
     

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