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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Audyn, Feb 7, 2009.

  1. Audyn

    Audyn TPF Noob!

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    This is the first time experimenting. :S


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  2. bwlergh

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    Your ISO is a bit too high and your white balance is slightly off (towards the red end of the spectrum, perhaps desaturate it a bit?)
    I know that you are at the mercy of whoever does the lighting.

    Next time try shooting with a faster shutter speed as well. I've been able to photograph as low as 1/80 at live shows without blur, handheld.

    What were your ISO, aperture and shutter speed?
     
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    The first one has potential for sure. With a different crop, I'm feeling a very extreme crop, you could have a very interesting photo! The building to the left is distracting. And I like your idea for the fourth one, possibly try converting it to black and white, I find the colors distracting.

    Great experiments!
     

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