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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by noob873, Dec 24, 2009.

  1. noob873

    noob873 TPF Noob!

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    came up with this yesterday, harsh cc/comments welome

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    I take it, you didn't use all three of your speedlights. Would make ad shots for the hat, or all of the attire for that matter. Cool shots.
     
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    Just used one of my 600r heads from straight above/camera right, I wanted it to almost have an affect like a street light or something.
     
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    iolair No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Great shots, though I agree with peekay's suggestion on cropping the second one.
     
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    ithink you nailed the streetlight look.
    very sinister and well done.

    my only nitpick, is that in the second image, im still seeing some minor background residue.

    i agree with the crop suggestion for #2 as well.

    nicely done!
     
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    Yeah Im usually very strict on my self about using the rule of 3rd's when I'm not using symmetry, but for this one I thought I'd try something different and ease up on it a little bit but still have slightly more space on the right. I guess I should just go back to it though. :p

    Also I couldn't see the background "residue" until I tilted my screen differently, easy fix.
     
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    IMO, lots of attitude, no emotional impact because I can't see any person - just a little glint of eyes would change it all
    Now its like a jacket ad in BW
     
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