Geese Heading Home

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by ClarkKent, Mar 21, 2005.

  1. ClarkKent

    ClarkKent TPF Noob!

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    This was a picture that I had taken in the middle of the day and thought that I would play around with it a little bit. Nothing spectacular, comments? :confused:

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    The colors are beautiful in this. I like the silouhette effect, but the birds all seem to have a brownish glow around them. I think it would help if the image were sharped, and if you removed the "halos" from around the birds. But don't change the colors they're great :)
     
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    Again, this was something of a new project for myself. I spend a lot of time in photoshop. On this compostion I was trying to mimick something of what I would see in a painting. With is picture being taken right in the middle of the day against a bright blue sky, And turning the geese into the silouhette, I found it hard to get rid of the heilo effect with some of the birds that were flying so closely.
     
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    Very nice colours and composition but the amount of noise really detracts from the picture. The image would be greatly improved if you can sort the noise levels out, though I can appreciate the difficulty with this type of image.
     

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