Geometry

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  1. Algoessailing

    Algoessailing TPF Noob!

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    I don't think this is a really exciting photo, but I liked all the geometry. Opinions/Critique Please....



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  2. John E.

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    Good shot. I really enjoy these pictures. The shadow really makes the picture. It looks a tad bright darkening a little may help.
     
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    Mate - that red X has perfect geometry alright.
     
  4. Trig

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    Worked the second time I went to go look at the image.

    Yea the geometry is very cool, as you said, not very exciting, but the best you could make of what you were shooting :D
     
  5. Algoessailing

    Algoessailing TPF Noob!

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    I actually brightened it up before posting, everyone said my last pic looked dark.

    [/quote]Mate - that red X has perfect geometry alright.

    I don't know why my pics only load half the time? Does it to me too.
     
  6. jadin

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    I think it's perfect. Great angles shapes. Very bold contrast. I wouldn't change a thing.
     
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    i love it. one of those shots i can see on a wall of a home or restaurant
     
  8. magali

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    maybe try to colorize the picture, it should be funnier :lol: Maybe pink or orange ? :p
     
  9. Michel Brosius

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    A very successful image, but perhaps would be better to cut in top to accentuate graphics.
    Cordialement, Michel

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  10. magali

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    well, we can modify your picture ? yes ? (if no, just say it, I will delete my post)
    I see it like that : [​IMG]
     
  11. John E.

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    I am being very picky when I said a tad I meant a sliver of a shade. It could be my monitor is showing it lighter than others.
     
  12. Mo

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    Great goemetry and shapes! Like the composition. But, I think it's too bright towards the top.
     

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