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Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by Birinni, Jul 18, 2009.

  1. Birinni

    Birinni TPF Noob!

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    Since no one with more experience has replied, I'm going to take a stab at C&C. I hope you don't mind. :mrgreen:

    It's an interesting photo. I like photos of architecture. However, it's skewed somewhat. I think it could benefit from some correction with the PTLens plugin or app.

    Also,the color is nothing special. It seems more dramatic in B&W.

    Lastly, why such a large frame? It seems a little distracting.

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    I don't like being too harsh with my comments, but I just don't see the artistic value in this one. Now, I can't say too much, because I've had the same comment on some of my work, but in this one the two structures in the foreground (left and bottom) leave me wondering what they are.

    I would have like to have seen a wider angle on this that gave us some indication of what we're looking at.
     
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    it is the Mystique that Adds that value to the image, i personally prefer the border in this, it sets a nice contrast point, the Colour version is my favorite tbh
     

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