GirlFriend C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by er111a, Nov 3, 2009.

  1. er111a

    er111a TPF Noob!

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    please till me what you think
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I love the first one.
    The second, notsomuch.
     
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    bentcountershaft Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I don't really know enough to offer these critiques but I'll offer what I like and don't like. The first one looks cool. The second one I think would have looked better if the center of the effect was on her right eye.
     
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    first one reminds me of the movie poster for "crush" with alicia silverstone... but it was so long ago i don't remember if it's actually similar or if it just makes me think of it...

    2nd one is blah... puts an awful lot of focus on her nose...
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    I'd go along with the general consensus that the first picture is interesting, and the second one, not so much. I like the way she looks in the first shot, but the second one seems to focus a lot of attention on her nose, and it's so light and detail-free that it just seems a poor place to place the emphasis.
     
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    Can you explain how you got the effect with the first one. It is really impressive.
     
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    kvas691 TPF Noob!

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    1st ones cool. 2nd ones not as cool, but with some tweeking, could look cool. has potential. curious as to how u got the first one?
     
  8. er111a

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    I made it with gimp
     
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    Don't really like either of them just not my style I guess you could say. I just don't find anything artistically appealing about really edited photos.
     
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    Andy Warhol you ain't.
    Pretty girl.....I think.....under all the tomfoolery.
    Now we know you can play with filters, gadgets, software and such.
    Some might like the first one, it's a tiny bit interesting.
    Second is a mess.
     
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    Inst!nct TPF Noob!

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    this is what it hought, its reminded me of chicks at my school that go on piknic, the fake photoshop website and edit a picture, sure its cool for myspace but i dont see the reason of putting it up for C&C


    congratz on the gf though OP, i recommend doing some actual model shots with her, like with a good backdrop, proper lighting, would look a lot better than myspace pics run through gimp you know?
     
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