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  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    candid street shot at NC State.

    c/c please!

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    nice composition

    is this a stealth advertisement for thewolfweb though? :)
     
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    I couldn't help it... I looked the website up. It's not naughty... it looks like... a school forum?

    As for the photo: have you tried other tints other than blue? Reddish or brown, maybe?
     
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    I like it, very natural (not surprising, since it's a candid, but you captured the right moment) body language in the subjects. I would probably up the contrast a little bit and do some ever-so-slight spot-sharpening of the girls. Pleasing shot, though.
     
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    I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important.
     
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    I agree with that completely.
     
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    haha, thanks!
    thewolfweb was just something that happened to be in the picture and was not intentional.

    ill give other tints a go. when i first edited this, i didnt realize id made it so blue, but then i rather liked the blue so i posted it. i have another go at it later on. thanks!

    thanks for the kind words and feedback!

    yep, ill give it a go. thanks!

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    for the love of god, keep it as it is!!
     
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    The blu dosen't look terrible though, maybe the mid tones just need adjusted a little

    hmm that blond girl on the right has nice hair:lmao:
     
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    how's this? better? worse?

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    its nice but blue is better
     
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    That is much more pleasing to my eyes. Blue one is too harsh for the scene IMHO.
     

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