glamour model

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  1. raider

    raider TPF Noob!

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    for your review:

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    It's kinda foggy, isn't it? She's a pretty girl and you have nice focus and all, but it seems like it should have more contrast to it.
    Is she laying on a reflective fabric? Maybe that's it.
     
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    I'd agree with the bit about more contrast. nice shot though
     
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    I agree, more contrast would help this image a lot.
     
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    right - mylar background - and I was expecting the contrast comments - I'll take it into PS right now - thanks for the comments!
     
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    Having a dark top to match the dark eyes and lips and hair would have been better. otherwise I like it. its kinda like a high key. :)
     
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    I won't bother talking about the contrast - I love the composure. Nice shot, nice angle, great capture of the hair and eyes. I'd be interested in seeing your edit, if you can be bothered. I think this could be a great shot. What'd ya use by way of lighting?
     
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    I like the shot...and no contrast comment from me either. I would have like to see either all of her hair in the shot like running water down the pic or a closer shot. Nice work and great model.
     
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    whoa - sorry about the lack of responses by me! I never have been back to check and now I found this old thread from a search. Well, I guess I can post a link to my glamour model web page. No worries - work safe.

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