Gorgeous Black And White

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  1. JMLPictures

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    What do you think?

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    I like the exposure and the B&W works well. However, I do not like the the feet cut off directly at the ankles and the piece of hair covering her face... it's too distracting IMO.
     
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    The idea is good, but it's a little blurry. I'd try to take it again if you can. It's just slightly out of focus and it could be better. Good content though. I agree about the hair. Not there. On the face is nice, but not over her eye. You'd get the sexy effect you were looking for though if you pulled it off to the side a bit and maybe had her hold it and make like she's contemplating chewing on it maybe. She'd need a bit of a Mona Lisa smile for it to work, but in that outfit, it would be a nice pose.
     
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    Im not sure why it looks blurry here... THe high-res is 100% in focus and is clear... weird.

    Josh
     
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    I agree, I would change a little bit the capture.
    I would cut some black space from the top and add some on the bottom.
     
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    Arkanjel Imaging No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Cant see either of her eyes. Could use a little emotion too. Good exposure though.:thumbup:

    Edit: ditch the watch.
     
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    I think ill post a link to the high-res... it's much easier to see lol

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    Except for it being not so sharp, and maybe the hair covering her eye, I like it as is, even with her feet cut off. The comp and balance look just right to me. The shadows and skin tones are both:thumbup:
     
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    not a bad shot
     

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