Graves Before Sunset

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  1. DaveWrong

    DaveWrong TPF Noob!

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    These were taken at the church where i took my first sunset shots last week, cc would be good please for compostition etc

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  2. Markw

    Markw No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the creative use of lighting, but I would have liiked to see more of the lower of the gravestones. The sky is nice, but so mch of it takes away from the subject of the photo IMO. Very nice though.

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    its a good start, but needs a reshoot. the composition has to much cut off of almost everything.
     
  4. BTilson

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    I agree. I like this shot, but it really feels to me like the lens needed to be pulled back/zoomed out a bit to get some more in the shot.
     
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    Good attempt, I would have lowered the angle down to the ground. I agree about there being too much sky.
     
  6. Arch

    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yes it is a good attempt and i can see what you were going for with the stone on the left to try and get the whole shape in. It would have worked better tho if you were lower down, as it is, its a bit like hovering over them. Good effort tho :thumbup:
     

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