Graveyard of Nuns 2 Advise taken C&C Please

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  1. matt_paul85

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    I took some of the advise I got on my first post. Here is the result and then some. Hope you all enjoy. Looking forward to the feedback.

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    the "main" head stone looks a little out of focus BUT it adds a great deal to the shot so it really works well. I love it great job.
     
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    Thanks mike! I thought it turned out really well. My best PP to date I guess.
     
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    BUMP! Any more thoughts?
     
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    Well.... (without being there) I feel I want to move the camera up high enough to see the tops of the other stones, creating more converging lines.

    Just a thought.

    -Pete
     
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    ...Am *I* crazy (don't answer that!)...or is this the 3rd pic posted?? I thought there was one, done like this, only not quite so dark???

    Dunno...the headstones seems a touch too "bright" and the rest is a titch too dark??

    :O)
     
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    I like the low POV on this, and the treatment has a very gothy(?) effect. If ya get the chance, try what Pete said about the higher angle.
    Still diggin this one tho. Keep shootin man.
     
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    I can see that. I will go for more angles next time I'm up there.

    This is just the second time I've posted this pic. Just different PP. I do see what you're saying about the light and darks. That's what I was going for, kind of one extreme to the other. I liked the contrast between the too in this! just my personal opinion.

    Thanks Chiller! As soon as I can get back up to Indiana I will do a reshoot. I don't know if "goth" was what I was going for but I do see it! lol. As always i appreciate the comment
     

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