GreenHouseSky

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  1. craig

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    Today: No rehearsal, no set construction, no work, no nothing... Yes!!!

    I woke up early to no sun and sprinkling rain. Determined; I set out locally to get some shots and ended up at the Middle School. Nothing too dramatic (as you can see) but invigorating none the less. This is my fave from today. A portion of the kids green house just waiting for above freezing temps to get started.

    I mostly enjoy the lines and almost rainbow effect of the cheap metal. Feel free to spill all thoughts and or crit's.
    Nikon D1: ƒ10 @ 1/250th cloudy white balance.

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    Sorry, I just don't like it. The subject, in my opinion, is extremely boring. Maybe if the pic was taken a bit further away then you may end up with a better looking composition.
     
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    Hey now... You do not have to say sorry to me, but thanks any way!

    I sort of suspected the "boring" response. Of all the frames I shot this one sparked my interest. A classic case of "I'm the world's greatest photographer and anything I shoot is going to be cool". The moral of the story is: No one is the world's greatest photographer. Getting the work out there and discussing it is almost mandatory.
     

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