Guess The Expression

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  1. The Phototron

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    I just realize that the eyes might not be white enough, but please don't let that be your main critique. ;)
     
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    The red dot on the side of her face pulls the attention more than anything else. A little skin retouch might help nicely
     
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    I guess since it's my own work, I tend to ignore the little mole and zips here and there, unintentionally of course. Thanks for pointing out. I'll fix it later.
     
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    her face is blown out on the right check, have you tried adjusting this?
     
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    It's intentional, and there is still some detail. Maybe I should try to make it a bit more subtle if it's too distracting.
     
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    the glasses are reflecting purple light over (her right our left) eye.
     
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    Yeah it's a technical issue, do you know how to solve it? I have no clue, all I do know is that broad lighting will get rid of reflections in the eye glass, but I don't know to fix it when doing a frontal shot.
     
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    I just wish it was at a better angle...maybe a more centered one, so we see the face "eye-to-eye". Try looking at the work of Andres Serrano for inspiration.
     
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    Yeah, it should be, although I don't see how Andres Serrano's work will inspire portraits, you mean the guy with Piss Christ right? I haven't any other work by him, maybe you could post some links?
     

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