"Guitar for Hire"

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  1. MyaLover

    MyaLover TPF Noob!

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    Met this guy at a talent show, got to talking and he asked me if Id do some pics for him. So here they are....

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    Excellent shots. I really enjoy looking at your work.
     
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    Some great shots. No.2 could be a CD cover.
     
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    really nice shots. it bothers me a little that the head of the guitar is cut off in 2
     
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    Lovely photos, but next time, PLEASE don't chop the head of the guitar off (#2), it just ruins the picture.
     
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    The last one if my favorite. It looks like the rest are really nice images slightly spoiled by bad framing/cropping:

    2. The guitar head is missing. Actually bothered me more the first time around, now I kind of like it - looks more gritty (flame away)
    3. A little close to the edge on the right side - a hair to the right and the framing would have been wonderful.
    4. His head is way too close to the edge on that one.

    The only other thing that bothers me is that the train tracks are a huge cliche.

    But - and I know by now it seems like I've been crapping all over your work - that's just some constructive criticism. I really like them. They're sharp, make great use of depth of field, and have very nice tonality.
     
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    Nr.6, cropped differently of course, could be a very nice CD Cover. I like all the shots, though. Great work.
     
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    No 2 and 6 are my favs....again like everyone the guitar being cut off in 2 bothers me as well as 6...i also don't like that his head is cut off, but that's just my opinion
     
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    oh yeah no 3 LOVE
     
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    These are all wonderful, but number 1 is my favorite, with 6 at a close second.
     
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    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Nice work. :)

    I like 1 & 6 the most.
     
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    Thanks everyone!
     

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