Haiku Corner

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  1. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    It's been a while, huh, Manda? ;)


    I ain't no writer
    I got no stories to tell
    Words fail me blank blank



    Truth swirls around me
    Clawing my eyes for answers
    Leaving me open



    Can it be, for sooth,
    that the mouse deserves life too?
    And the cat said no.
     
  2. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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  3. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    Fridays rock my world
    The weekend awaits me. will
    the day ever end? :(



    Grumbling, pissed and
    ready to kill, screw you all
    just leave me alone



    Quit f*cking it up!
    Why can't you do anything
    right? Managers. Grrr. :x
     
  4. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    hahaha Min!

    your haiku is always fabulous.

    nose won't stop sniffling
    beanie holding my head in
    patient i am not
     
  5. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    I feel my way 'round
    it is silent in the dark
    the chemicals smell.



    T max one hundred
    nine min in D seven six
    my favorite film.
     
  6. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I sit here, waiting
    For "Life: Part II" to begin
    Part I is over.

    Will I be ready....?
    All the challenges await
    - and oh, I want them.
     
  7. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    Hey! Nice, both of you!
    I really like your haikus.
    Keep em' coming please. :D


    I hereby declare
    all replies in this thread shall
    be in haiku form.
     
  8. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Oh, I must protest
    That is WAY too much trouble
    I will let you down.....
    :wink:
     
  9. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    not quite sure about how haikus are suppose to work but I just thought of this one:

    furry puppies wag their tails
    in colourful sunset poses
    only if ksmattfish approves

    :mrgreen:
     
  10. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    mark nagy is hot
    his photographs inspi-re
    so does his tooshie
     
  11. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    haiku is a po-
    -em with seventeen sylla-
    -bles, five, seven, five
     
  12. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Now, that was perfect
    I hope Mark understands it
    I fear he is slow

    :twisted:
     

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