Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by PrecociousEmber, Apr 10, 2005.
tell me what ya think!
which do you like better? what can i do to improve?
I think #2 is better composed, but I'd crop out that distracting yellow area at the bottom..
I like the second one, but I'd play more with dof the background is still distracting
I like the shot, but the bottom third is distracting. Either I would go with an increased depth of field, or tighten the shot so the bottm part not in focus is not there.
thanks for the help.
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