hairy monster

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  1. PrecociousEmber

    PrecociousEmber TPF Noob!

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    tell me what ya think!

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    which do you like better? what can i do to improve?
     
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    I think #2 is better composed, but I'd crop out that distracting yellow area at the bottom..
     
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    I like the second one, but I'd play more with dof :) the background is still distracting
     
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    I like the shot, but the bottom third is distracting. Either I would go with an increased depth of field, or tighten the shot so the bottm part not in focus is not there.
     
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    :) thanks for the help.
     

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