jwbryson1
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SB-700 off camera, camera left about 30 degrees, bounced off ceiling. Kids with black backdrop. C&C welcome. I'm trying to get this right so you won't hurt my feelings. Thanks! :mrgreen:
My criticism is that their eyes are not as lit as I'd like them to be. They were better lit in a bigger version, but I posted this shot on Photobucket and shrunk it for this forum. Maybe that affected the eyes?
The lighting also looks like I shot it on camera and is a bit flat, but I do see some definition. Maybe a bigger angle would have helped with that.
My criticism is that their eyes are not as lit as I'd like them to be. They were better lit in a bigger version, but I posted this shot on Photobucket and shrunk it for this forum. Maybe that affected the eyes?
The lighting also looks like I shot it on camera and is a bit flat, but I do see some definition. Maybe a bigger angle would have helped with that.