Hannah

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  1. Dubie

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    This is one of my photographs that I did for my course in school. I did touch it up in DPP because it was a bit dark.

    What do you think? What might you change. Portraits are not one of my fave subjects.:wink:

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    To be honest she looks less than thrilled to be photographed. He hair is all in her face, when that actually draws attention away from her features.also the bright white blends into her jacket, not defining her figure out all. And she is slouching. I don't mean to be harsh but I feel this could have been a lot better. The pose just does not suit your model well at all.
     
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    I'll take whatever critizism I can and do what works for me. Thanks. This is actually a kind of candid portrait. I actually liked the light reflecting on her hair and behind her. What do I know. :)

    As far as being thrilled...hehe...she was trying to watch cartoons and I was in the way. I have learned not to photograph family. They really don't care.
     
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    hey dont feel bad on thatt, my fiancee flips me the bird or gives me a cheesy grin :)
     

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