Happy? Birhtday

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by rein, May 22, 2008.

  1. rein

    rein TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 17, 2008
    Messages:
    171
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    [​IMG]


    Exposure Time: 0.040 s (1/25) Aperture: f/4.5 ISO Equiv.: 400

    just messing around

    [​IMG]
     
  2. schumionbike

    schumionbike TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2007
    Messages:
    1,083
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Houston, Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think you have too much empty space on the top and it seem like you could have gone for a wider aperture. The fact that everything is in focus except for the kid is kinda of creepy for me though, other might like it.
     
  3. kellylindseyphotography

    kellylindseyphotography TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2008
    Messages:
    1,270
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Haverhill, Ma
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I like this shot a lot. I'd like to see it in a series.

    Your spelling needs to be checked , though.
     
  4. rein

    rein TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 17, 2008
    Messages:
    171
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    thanks, the empty space was a result of removing a person and a baby from the background
     
  5. rein

    rein TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 17, 2008
    Messages:
    171
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    empty space fixed!
     
  6. tim.bennett

    tim.bennett TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2007
    Messages:
    131
    Likes Received:
    5
    Location:
    Rotterdam, The Netherlands
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Maybe cropping a bit tighter would maybe work. And i agree with shumionbike i would have liked to see the boy a little sharper. larger aperture might work.
     
  7. kellylindseyphotography

    kellylindseyphotography TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2008
    Messages:
    1,270
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Haverhill, Ma
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    OMG thats super effin freaky@!!! wow.
     
  8. rein

    rein TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 17, 2008
    Messages:
    171
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    thanks guys, im learning bit by bit
     

Share This Page