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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MyNameIsChris, Sep 16, 2008.

  1. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Did a shoot tonight for my neighbor because he's selling his bike and wanted some pictures with it before it sold. C&C please.

    Unedited besides a crop on the right side.
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    Soft box at 3/4 to right.
    Bare at 3/4 to left.

    Tell me what you think!
     
  2. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    C'mon, 27 views and no comments?
     
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    yamadak13 TPF Noob!

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    I dig it. I really like the angle.
     
  4. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Not bad, but I'd tone down the bare bulb a little and increase the soft-box just a bit.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like POV and angle here.
    Since I know next to nothing about studio lighting, I refrain from commenting on that.
    Somehow this has the oversharpness of some HDR photos ...
     
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    Battou No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Crop is a touch tight for my taste.
     
  7. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    This is definitely not an HDR, the only thing I did in photoshop was crop the right side a little bit.

    Yeah I wasn't too happy with it either, I took the picture too tight on the left side so I decided cropping the right a little bit would make it look more even. I would have rather had more negative space on both sides as well.
     
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    dab_20 TPF Noob!

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    Other then the tightness of the crop, I like this one a lot. Good angle, lighting, and sharpness. Nice!
     
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    I like your placement of the subject in the frame. Excellent use of negative space above and below.
     

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