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  1. timethief

    timethief TPF Noob!

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    I am really curious at how this looks like through someone else's eyes.


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    dcclark TPF Noob!

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    Wow, the patterns of the wall and floor are bugging my eyes out!

    The patterns actually (to me) seem to create a sense of movement, which is funny for a still-life sort of photo. It is actually a bit hard to look at.
     
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    An ever so slight crop on the left side to make it symmetrical may do it for me. Something is off for me and I think it's the more left wall showing than right wall.

    Yeah, the patterns. They are doing crazy stuff to my eyes as well.
     
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    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Kinda looks 3D, I like it. :thumbup:
    (It has depth - I feel like I'm there.)

    I agree that a small crop for symmetry would help a lot.
     
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    I like how the lines in the foreground lead your eye to the wall/benches.

    Cheers,
    Majdi
     
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    Ngoface TPF Noob!

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    The walls make the area look cluttered and isolated. It looks like a great place to have a photoshoot though. Great shot by the way.
     
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    It looks over-photoshopped.
     
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    Steph No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It does not work for me: too much contrast and too much barrel distortion.
     
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    i agree with the last two, slightly overdone, i mean as your doing it it may seem like its getting better and better as you do it, i did that on a few of my pics but everyone told me they look like pencil drawings, so i just made subtle changes and it seems to work better when it looks real, only enhanced.
     
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    Thank you all for the comments, much appreciated.
     
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    crop n post again .... would appreciate it
     
  12. timethief

    timethief TPF Noob!

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    I already had it done actually.
    here it is.
    I decided to do a series of simillar pictures taking into consideration the comments on this thread.

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