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  1. SpeedTrap

    SpeedTrap TPF Noob!

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    Here is a new one from a shoot last weekend.

    C&C Always Welcome

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    Sw1tchFX TPF Noob!

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    She's a bit flat for the dark blue, I think deeper shadows would balance out the deep blue in the background.

    Or just remove the navy blue thingy.
     
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    I think it is hot, hot, hot. But that is just my humble opinion.
     
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    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    LOVE IT!!!!!!
     
  5. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice work.

    I don't hate the background but I'm not sold on it either. It does add flair but it's a little distracting IMO.

    Normally you don't want to have the back of the model's hand facing the camera, but it's not so bad here because it blends in with her skin.

    I like that you cropped into her head. I imagine that it looks better than if you hadn't...but it still feels a little too close. Her eye is catching me as the the main focal point and it's just too close to the edge, IMO.

    Well done :thumbup:
     

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