Haven't posted in a while. Pretty pleased with the way this came out *possible NSFW*

[fotogenik]

Any comments?

 

[Corry]

I'm putting a 'possible NSFW' warning in your title, as many people browse this forum from work.

 

[RMThompson]

I like it, but I would try to put it in black and white, the simplistic background lends itself to simple colors, and the several muted colors on her panties and other clothing distract. Id do it myself to show you, but I dont want to upset you if you dont want edits to your work.

 

[oldnavy170]

I don't really care for the way her legs are positioned. Not sure what it is but they don't seem to work for me. Sorry.

 

[craig]

Let us know what you are going for here. The lighting is basic, but good. Maybe open the highlights and midtones.

The pose looks like a secretary trying to hump her boss. Kind of sexy in a porno way.

Love & Bass

 

[ordinaryday]

I agree with oldnavy170 the legs don't work it as much as they could. The way they're positioned makes them look pretty short compared to her torso.

Eh sorry, I'm just critical.

I think the one to the right should be more extended and have the heel touching the floor (heels are supposed to elongate the leg afterall) and the way her foot is positioned they just look like clunky platforms with the eye drawn to the front, not to the stiletto point (hah, probably the only reason I notice this is because I'm female). Plus the black of the shoe sort of blends in with the backdrop.

And the way the other leg is positioned has the knee as the focal point, drawing the calf and the ankle(skinniest part of the leg so it provides the most judgement of size) towards the back into the shadows. Plus by having that foot back it forces her leg to lean heavily at an angle on the thigh making it look more bulky. But easily fixed with photoshop.

But the top part of the photograph is really rockin for what it's worth.